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Unread 05-22-2003, 01:27 PM
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Seems much better suited to metrical than non-met, but here's an attempt at a non-goldfish...

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The raven, perched upon a powerline,
took flight with wings too widely spread,
touched off, and now lies in a pile
of well-burnt featherbits,
his charcoal plumage charcoaled.
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