Revised with new feets and beats? Am I getting closer now?
Are sonnets really such a breeze to write?
I’m thinking that it’s not worth a big fight.
Fourteen lines with rhymes written nice and tight,
should not take poetic muscles and might.
To come up with a poem that in my sight
one can compose without being too bright.
But if we look at a different light
on my past posts a poet’s ugly blight...
speaking of butts seemed to quickly ignite,
flames of upset and disdain from a height,
that almost convinced me to take my flight.
I’m not even sure I’m doing this right...
Hairy asses I can discuss all night.
Although some may think the subject is trite.
*breaking the sonnet habit...*
I don't
need rum to rhyme
about butts. 'Cause I'm nuts
enough to enjoy something hairy,
scarry?
HEY you
sonnet lovers
like rabbits, a habit
to multiply? What's there to gain?
cinquain?
Step up?
It's fun! the beat
is 2 4 6 8 2,
the rhyme is there, not to scare ya.
Dare ya.
[This message has been edited by Melalope (edited May 06, 2002).]