Hi Kate,
You are right regarding "lap" because it must be proceeded by another word ie,eye-lid brain-pan ex, the 11 must make sense on there own in terms of the human body.

leg
gut
gum
arm
rib
hip
jaw
eye
toe
lip
ear
Great poem Kate and Roger
Richard.



[This message has been edited by richard taylor (edited January 10, 2004).]