A non-anonymous crit of anonymous poem
___________Critique of To Be A pilots Wife_________________
Dear Anonymous, whoever you might be and where ever you might go. Just know you dont have to deal with such trife as to be a pilot's wife. I bet that your as wonderful as you poem is when your, "primped and pressed." This poem caught my eye and held it there. Thanks for the read Anonymous, I look forward to seeing more of your poems. ( ;
Sincerely,
J.P
[This message has been edited by Joel VanDersarl (edited October 24, 2004).]
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