Oh heck, Robert....
I thought it was a FunExercise forum!
Take note, passers-by, of the sharp erosions
that wrinkle my brow 'cause of Robert's emotions
That better? Or shall we debate the metricality of the poem this came from? *grin*
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Julie Stoner suggests the following:
'a FunExcise thread of two-line "tailgaters"--i.e., famous lines of poetry, turned into the first halves of couplets? Example:
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I didn't realise it had to be a 'first' line from the description *humble appeal for forgiveness*
[This message has been edited by Jerry Glenn Hartwig (edited January 14, 2004).]