Dear Dougsie,
That would make S1 boring, don't you think?
That would make my narrator sound as immature and sociopathic as the one in your last poem, but thanks anyway.
The liquor store is closed, my wife emptied the last bottle into the toilet, and I'm broke. I'll get back to this asap.
My connection died and I'm going to sleep for a week. Will think about your suggestions meanwhile.
I ran your suggestion by my two-year-old son and he said "Poopie."
I ran your suggestion by my dog and she had puppies. BTW, is anyone interested in a sweet little cocker spaniel mix?
I sent the earlier version of this out and just heard that it won the Richard Wilbur Award. I shouldn't have posted this version for critique. Moderator, please delete immediately!
What you said was very meaningful. Unfortunately, my husband told me not to change a thing and if I do he'll throw me out. You're cute, but not that cute. Just forget what happened last week, ok?
Moderator, please lock this thread.
Terese
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