Doug on the sea,
thanks, it gave me
a simile.
I'm heels-over-head in love with Bob Dylan Thomas Mann's cliched language.
Dear Doug Z.,
The phrase "the proof is in the pudding" is a unique way to say a mathematician's work is verified by the dessert.
The comments regarding Homer are irrelevant; if he was Greek, he could have never met Jethro (who was living in Midian).
Deer Dug, See?
This is neither a performance piece nor a non-performance piece. Obviously you have not attained satori, it is a poem and a non-poem at the same time.
Dougsie, my Chronicle poem has no theological or political ax to grind: no sin, no tax.
PugZ, as "Dr. Robert" is to the Rolling Stones and as "Dr. John" is to the Beatles, so are all suggestions to all poems.
The theme requires that I end.
The theme requires that I stop.
The theme requires every line.
Poetry is a craft of co-promises and my feeling is that we are all entitled to our onions.
IF (me speak) THEN (only Fortran) ELSE (silence).
Because the poem has nothing to do with WWII aircraft, the phrase "a poem with zero promise" must be a typo for "a poem with Zorro promise."
Doug C,
"B4" is the fourth term of an infinite sequence of rational numbers converging to the irrational number "B"
"Ur" is the town that Abram and Sarai were from
Yes, I do realise that I am using “serene as a nun” here; but without that punctuation, Mark, how can the above response be read correctly?
L. Villain
PS: you misspelled "Lower Rate"
PPS: Moderator, please lock this liquor cabinet.
[This message has been edited by Robert Meyer (edited July 02, 2006).]
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