Carol, Clay, Bugsy, Terese, Jan, Jerry, Quincy, epigone, Janet, David, Marion, Michael, Tim, Mark, Jason, Katy, Duncan, and Susan--I can't thank you enough for your very helpful comments. Absolutely spot on! I'm now working on a revision to incorporate your great suggestions.
Theodora--Thanks for looking in.
[Edited to say: Oh, shoot--I just realized that these are supposed to be FRESH, i.e. NEW, and I've been on the receiving end of this one a few times.]
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