Dear everybody, thank you for helping my poem. I am so glad I finly found a sight where the people are intellengent and will tell me the truth about my poem and help me learn and that is why I am hear even if it really is to bad nobody realy understood that it was a poem about my spiritual plane because I have had a lot of it and everyone seams to care only
about the typoes and the comas and the meater
which is hard to understand any way and I no in my heart it is not my best work and doesnt have enough images like you said but I am so glad you told me because I shouldnt have posted it becuse it already got publsished in an impotent magazine and thankyou for all you're help because next week I will post a much beter one. it has a butterfly in it. and many other images to.
with all my love
Suzie
PS Micheal Cantor thank you, but what does pffa stand four ?
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