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Unread 05-31-2006, 10:51 AM
Jan D. Hodge Jan D. Hodge is offline
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Okay, judge(s), quibble with this one (perhaps because it does not name its subject in the title? or uses abab rhyme rather than xaxa?). At least it is a serious one.

Christmas 1776

He took dead aim at Britain’s crown
across the river gorge.
The Hessians bled in Camden town;
it warmed at Valley Forge.

Damn! It's about a general who became president (on an earlier "restrictions" list, but not the latest). Talk about Calvinball! So scratch it. I'll go island hopping.




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