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Unread 05-02-2008, 11:52 PM
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Looking more closely at the string see that Janet wrote a splendid rhymed sestina. I think, as she hints, that the problem is to prevent them getting ponderous and DULL. I don't think Mochael's is either of these things I love it.
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