Wow! I still don't like the form, as a form, but the recent poems by Rose and Wendy are great. I wonder if the soft sense of rhyme helps. Rose has mark/heart, and then slack/back; and Wendy (who always does great things with sound) has some inter-stanzaic action with horizon/bison/arising/rhyming/quivering wandering down through the poem.
[This message has been edited by Michael Cantor (edited June 29, 2008).]
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