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Unread 06-27-2008, 03:45 PM
Tim Murphy Tim Murphy is offline
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Hello, I've never been here before, but Slipp alerted me to this discussion. All very good stuff! Shaun, I think your quatrain is marvelous. Pinions. Minions. In tribute to all of you I shall post my two line response to one of Shaun's dreary Petrarchan sonnets.

Working Girl

With bandoleros crisscrossing her tits,
"Puerco," she snarled, and blew her pimp to bits.

yr lariat, Tim

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