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Unread 11-25-2008, 10:55 AM
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I have bathed
the icy lumps
the pies
of sweat

that were in
the deli ox
and which
you were flavoring

for our
erect baby son
so we scold
give me a break


This is not quite right yet as checking back and forth with the original is driving me nuts. But it's a start, and I have a couple of days to work on it.
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