Thread: Sonnet Blow-out III, Earsman
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Unread 05-08-2002, 07:28 AM
Rhina P. Espaillat Rhina P. Espaillat is offline
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Peter, I would say to stick with your "bland" rhyming words: stressing the strong ones by rhyming them in a poem this loaded with emotionally powerful images would feel like overkill.
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