Rhina, despite her identifying Gerry Cambridge as a Texan, has done her usual fine job of commenting on the sonnets. So thank you, Rhina, and thank you, Tim, for taking the time to post the sonnets and critique them. It's a fascinating group, and I agree with the judging. I got a good suggestion on fixing a troublesome line in my own (unpublished) one.
[This message has been edited by R. S. Gwynn (edited March 28, 2003).]
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