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Unread 12-21-2003, 01:14 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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I think this has been improved by the changes and was good to begin with. My one suggestion is that "useful" seems a rather bland word. Something along the lines of "trenchant" might be more effective.

Susan
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