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Unread 02-12-2004, 01:09 PM
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Originally posted by Al Ferber:
Clive,

Thanks for you learned commentary on this poem. You obviously spent some time and research to validate your observations. I got the impression that you've read a lot of books.

Al

Just had a PS thought:

roman candles ready to go off

Would that be less cosmetic and more in keeping with your literal multi-definitions? Other than that possible change I stand by the poem as written.


The first part of this response, unless I misread you, is snide, and the second part -- and here there is no possibility of misreading -- is belligerent. And this from one of the "stars" of the non-met board. This reinforces my concern that the majority of participants in that board haven't the foggiest notion of what how poetry workshop works.

epigone

edited to more properly characterize the first part of the response as "snide" rather than sarcastic.

[This message has been edited by epigone (edited February 12, 2004).]
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