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Unread 12-07-2004, 03:38 AM
Maggie Porter Maggie Porter is offline
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It appears that this poet is adept at creating a lasting image using the metaphor of painting (great), one that is sustained throughout the effort. The poet versifies well if Rhina's comment is proof of that (mine certainly isn't as all I know is what my ear hears and in this case it hears nothing out of tune).

Definitely a poem I'd read again and probably enjoy even more the second time around.

An A-plus last line finalizes the cohesive effort.
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