Thread: The Quick and the Dead
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Unread 12-05-2004, 11:18 AM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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May I suggest, as a quick fix to the misplaced modifier, "Since I was eldest, all eyes turned / toward me"?

Susan
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