Rose,
I share Tim's feelings about your poem. If you look at a map of New Zealand you will see that nobody is ever far from the sea. I haven't seen rays behaving as you describe but when I travelled by ship from Wellington, New Zealand, to Southampton, England--via Suez--I saw such magnificent leapng dolphins and flying fishes. I lived by the sea before I sailed for England and after pining in London I've lived near the sea in Sydney ever since. You catch the esprit and energy that I associate with the sea. Uplifting and joyous.
Janet
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