Carol
I actually like the effect of the and LET GO, but would it balance better for you if the "and" were omitted?
I wish that besides spondee there were a poetic equivalent of a breve. That's how I really read it. I remember we had this conversation once before and you explained to me that poetry didn't have that facility like music and I said I know, then it's jolly well time it did. Let's invent it
Janet