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Unread 12-02-2004, 06:55 AM
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I read L6 as almost-tetrameter, with a very subtle middle syllable in "gentling," and "ing" just barely--maybe mentally?--promoted. If there were a metronome keeping time in the background, the fourth tick would come eeeever so slightly after the "ing".

Works for me...so Carol must be WRONG!
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