Tom
I really like these poems and I care deeply about word/music in the most austere sense of that idea.
The content/music is not overt but it's there. I always find that pulling a poem to pieces like that tends to leave you with poem parts all over the floor and nothing much left to show for it. It reminds me of the time my father decided to tune the piano himself and took the whole thing apart and then stood there looking at it.
Just my two cents' worth.
Janet
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