Maz -
This poem reminds me of a Faberge easter egg - meticulously crafted, multi-faceted, glittering with both language and meaning. It absolutely shimmers with good words, and the lovelies like "fletched" and "snite", and the creations such as "cadge-boys, "full-summed" and "maiden-mild" both set the context and give it life. It's very finely done, and I really have no nits.
Michael Cantor
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