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Unread 03-15-2005, 08:30 AM
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This is so vivid--I can practically feel the sun dazzling my eyes as I read it. Love the combination of pop culture and history, and the way lines like these:

you metaphor
for all the fools who choose to fantasize


roll off the tongue. But perhaps most of all, I like to see a well-crafted formal poem that begins with FUCK, in all caps no less.
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