Thread: Sketches from Route 1 with Ed the Spense - Michael Cantor
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Unread 03-18-2005, 05:19 AM
Janet Kenny Janet Kenny is offline
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Michael,
I've already admired this rich brew. I think "compete" might serve instead of "complete" in stanza 4 and it offers opportunities for more malice.
Janet

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