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Multum in Parvo: Trimeter Open Mic
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06-23-2004, 12:36 AM
Geertjan a.k.a. Fugwozzle
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Very nice solution, Glenn. Except, the first line runs better for me like this: "Unpacking, I take stock". I think your suggestion is a suitably light ending (yes, despair is a bit strong here). -- Geertjan
Geertjan a.k.a. Fugwozzle