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Multum in Parvo: Trimeter Open Mic
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07-14-2004, 05:00 AM
Tim Murphy
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I think I'd say "embodies love." The meter is very well handled until the last stanza, where you've a tet and a di. I do think it is too much ado about too little and could profit by being substantially shortened.
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