Thread: Multum in Parvo: Trimeter Open Mic
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Unread 08-04-2004, 08:55 AM
Tim Murphy Tim Murphy is offline
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Robert Jordan, Most of these lines are tets rather than trimeter. The unsurety of the rhythm and the relentless monorhymes combine to make it singularly unimpressive.
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