Thread: Sonnet bake-off: Your Other Men
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Unread 06-30-2005, 08:37 AM
Tim Murphy Tim Murphy is offline
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Richard, one reason it works is the repetition of the opening rhyme and rhyme word at the end. The other is that it's just hammer and tongs powerful.
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