(would anyone have any trouble identifying its author?),--Len Krisak
This is what I mean by identifiable style. Tim Murphy has accomplished this elusive feat. Had I put one of these stanzas in the four on my recent thread on general, people would have picked up on it immediately.
If I can add anything I would see if the four 'the's in the first stanzas could be fewer:
a labrador, quartering, flushing, marking?
TJ
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