Mr. Gurga, in your opinion, does counting the English poem as if written in seventeen kana maintain sufficient regard for haiku measure?
swirling
snowflakes
black hat
su-e-ri-n-gu
su-no fu-re-i-ku-su
bu-ra-ku ha-to
G/W
[This message has been edited by Golias (edited May 03, 2004).]
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