05-10-2004, 02:51 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Ft Worth TX
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Quote:
Originally posted by Lee Gurga:
Curtis,
You may not be aware of this, but three images in three lines is normally considered a fault in haiku. The Japanese have some name for it which I can’t recall at present, but here we call it “shopping list” haiku. Almost always successful haiku have two, not three, images, as in Kiyoko’s haiku above.
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Good to know!
E. A. K.
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