Hey there, Curtis!
Would you believe that, in 2002--intending to give your newfangled form a try--I made a printout of your haiku rondeau, slipped it between the pages of my copy of Turco's
The Book of Forms, but . . .
In any case, I like the changes you made in Lines 2 & 3 of S-4.
[This message has been edited by Patricia A. Marsh (edited May 01, 2004).]