You have my permission to call me "Carol" if you like, Lee, because your "...Wow! What a difference without the titles!" made my day!
I like your suggestion for changing the first line of my second haiku to "Hunters approach and" . . . especially since I was considering changing that line to read "Hunter approaches". I like your suggested change much better! Thank you, Lee.
As for that first "cause and effect" haiku of mine: You've told me something
else I didn't know about haiku! So, thank you for that, too.
All best,
Patricia (aka "Carol"?)
[This message has been edited by Patricia A. Marsh (edited May 02, 2004).]