I'm not sure I would interpret the boyfriend as being gay. Seems more like he has intimacy issues. I guess N sees this when she realises it's not her breasts he's covering but her mouth.
I don't think it's that well written though... or revealing. My first reaction is that I've stumbled upon a lover's row that I'm best to stay out of. As a parting shot at the end of a relationship, it works, kinda.
As poetry? Hmmm. Not terrible but I'd agree it's not the best this place has to offer.
Anne:
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Somehow there was enmity sown between the sexes from the beginning of Adam's race. Division always causes war, but apparently it was necessary.
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I have no right but... please don't think that.
Dee: You are reading far too much into it. But I know what you mean.
[This message has been edited by Alexander Grace (edited May 08, 2008).]