Interesting comment, Dr. Mezey. This sonnet is more to my liking than the one you posted. True, yours is tidier, all the coloring was done inside the lines. But this one's more vivid and affecting; it feels like a poem that was written because it had to be written, not as an academic exercise. To each his own, I guess.
[This message has been edited by Rose Kelleher (edited May 07, 2008).]
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