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Originally posted by Simon Hunt:
How does the first line scan?
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I think the poet intends: iamb, trochee, iamb, iamb, iamb (just as in L6).
I think I share Simon's second question. I too would've liked a little more story to go with the atmospherics, but the "atmosphere of veiled regret"
is terrifically well-captured. It's a very fun read.