Can't say how I'd scan L1, since I don't know how Placa Real is pronounced. L6 has a delicate spondee-ish feeling in the second foot. L12 starts nicely with a trochee. Otherwise, I hear iambs throughout. I don't mind wondering who "we" are. The poem is like a dream or a Fellini movie. I think the secret of the couple is hidden in the preceeding descriptions, like dream interpretation.
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