aBOVE PLAca reAL the PALM trees NOD
is how I assumed it was stressed. A luminous poem I think. Those caged giraffes! Just wonderful.
It's a shame that moment when the girl steps from the shadows didn't coincide with the quatrain's beginning but that's not a serious matter. I love it.
Janet
(edited out "lunimous" but isn't that a good word?)
[This message has been edited by Janet Kenny (edited May 04, 2008).]
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