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Unread 10-13-2008, 08:01 PM
Henrietta kelly Henrietta kelly is offline
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Mary --- I found great inspiration in her own words all four below came from reading her site. The first is a straight steal the others from a word or two.

Stephen--My question is, did I steal or can I call the below works mine?

“since the distant past
only three changes in nature
best is transference”

“reverberation”
one beating heart sings of love
echoes hit the moon

“new way of seeing”
close both eyes and listen deep
in the earth for seeds

this and the ones that followed were inspired by the word flow . I will post all in the other thread. it has been a produtive morning if only one is fit to keep-

small "burn" in overflow
slipping bluebells crowd the banks
ringing in delight

a “burn” is a Scottish river de- light is not lol




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