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Originally posted by Mary Meriam:
Thanks, Lee, I like your haiku very much! You're teaching me how to read haiku - I've enjoyed all your lucid, helpful essays and notes that Steve C. posted. Here's a revision of one of mine:
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Thank you for your kind remarks--entirely undeserved, I am afraid.
live turtle
on the highway’s center strip
fucked
Now this is a little more direct, isn't it? Fucked, ideed! Much more interesting (and fun) to me as a reader than the original version.