oops! thanks Mary
be sure if you steal
a dream it is tagged owner
after owner
in the other room dreaming.
edit in-- donna agree something is working but cows don’t milk themselves. I know you mean producing the milk.
maybe "coming into milk" gives two senses , you also have a beat short on L1 and L3 where you can extend if you wish to
. I use the word dew because it adds texture and a time. and a colour for ease in case the cows look is not a familiar one--
Dew frosted pasture
tan cows coming into milk
That leaves a whole line vacant for the spin of choice - mine is something we no longer get--
Cream top of the bottle
well thats what I think anyway! ~~ henie
edit Ps
I do still like the moos soaking up the light, my edit was over the top as always.
[This message has been edited by Henrietta kelly (edited October 15, 2008).]