Thread: Haiku Master Class with Lee Gurga, 2008
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Unread 10-16-2008, 05:04 AM
Henrietta kelly Henrietta kelly is offline
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Originally posted by Christy Reno:


black tree white skies
filmed framed packed
to fly away.

I like the 2nd one without the bird word better. I know itchanges the outcome by it gives a study of the person



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