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Originally posted by Stuart Farley:
This thread has made for fascinating reading!
I'm new to haiku, and all that I know about it was learned from these very pages, not to mention Lee's articles!
Stuart
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Hi, Stuart! I think you have made a good start . . .
wide-eyed lunar reveler
gazing at a puddle
a drop of rain dissolves the moon
a batch of letters
dropped amongst the leaves
- now I'll be late....
I think this one is the better of the two. It has a certain genuineness of feeling, has a distinctive gift directly from you to the reader. Lee