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Originally posted by Maryann Corbett:
Lee, thanks for all these generous insights. I'm going to try a revision of my lone effort to see if I'm any closer to getting it.
Icy walking bridge.
Below, the highway screams.
Even air is frozen.
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Maryann, It really would be much, much better if you could share more than one poem, but absent that please send both versions of this one. Lee