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Originally posted by Cally Conan-Davies:
Haiku, in memory of the turtle.
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Lee, you have been marvelous. If you have time, could you say if these are nearer haiku than my first attempts?
Cally
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Cally, Please, don't be so kind! We don't want to give people the wrong idea!
>bird's nest
balls of fluff
under your bed
winter coat
a shot of heat
red hair on the collar
Yes, these have a nice ease of expression to them. Forge ahead! Lee