Lee I edited the haiku on page one – in my attempted Haibum I’m happy with the first now, as I feel it hits the mark of the time readily in the prose -- but I might be wrong
I dumped the second out of hand, and rethought--
Moths in the pantry
asleep in season’s
peppered reality
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with rations
every one
counts
-and Amended prose—to match
To have a memory like that! Forever is a plastic box
the dimensions of a short day, and the fortitude to spread
generations hoping for the lid to be burped; an open time,
that lets one part of you get free.
[This message has been edited by Henrietta kelly (edited October 16, 2008).]