Lee, I've got a new one - what do you think, please?
full moon
for all - civil partnerships
for some
Also, do you like my revision from "live" to "peering" in this one?
peering turtle
on the highway’s center strip
fucked
Also, a question. The leap in haiku reminds of the leap in the ghazal. Are you familiar with ghazals? Do you see any connection with haiku? I feel that if I hadn't already practiced leaping in ghazals, I would have been less able to leap in haiku.
Thanks!!!
Mary
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